Should everyone become an entrepreneur?

Pre-Writing

Should everyone become an entrepreneur?

(Case : Bachelor Degree)

Thesis Statement

I disagree if every bachelor degree should be an entrepreneur because everyone has their own shortcomings and advantages.

Major supporting sentence

1. Life balance in the first graduated year

2. Everyone has their unique capabilities

3.  Mental and Stress percentage

Counterargument

Some people said that if you want to be rich, so you need to become entrepreneur. But they are totally wrong, rich or not a person is, it depends on their spirit to be success.

Should everyone become an entrepreneur?

(Case : Bachelor Degree)

Everyone is unique. They have their own thoughts and backgrounds that made us could not argue with it. Bachelor Degree is the example of it, the stage of people who have various field of science according to their major’s concentration. That’s why, I disagree if every Bachelor Degree should be an entrepreneur. Due to several reasons behind it, everyone has some of their own shortcomings and advantages, that’s bachelor Degree also is.

First, a Bachelor Degree needs to balance their life in the first year after they are graduated. Like a baby who just born to the world, bachelor degree also same, they just graduated and just born to the world to see what the “real life” is. Because of that, there must be an experience for adapting them to the new world. If they just go become an entrepreneur, it is quiet risky because not everyone can successfully do adaptation to their new world, especially in the entrepreneurship world which has high risk percentage. Otherwise, If they fail, they will go down because they don’t have “comfort place” enough to be reserved. For example, a young entrepreneur didn’t afraid to take risk, if he/she go bankrupt that’s not a problem because he/she already got a good job. So, this is clear enough how important working first rather then become an entrepreneur for Bachelor Degree. Moreover, work life balance is thus defined as feeling effective and satisfied in both work and personal life domains (Greenhaus &  Allen, 2011).

Second, everyone has their unique capabilities. Lawrence Leganelli (2015) wrote in his page that “Everyone has their own unique gifts and abilities that they can share with the world.” In this case, It means that not everyone can match with entrepreneurship’s world. Some of people may love it, the others just like it as hobby, but in facts some of people not like that world anymore. This condition depends on human’s capability, because human has their own predilection. Let we take “plantation example”, we can’t plant every plantation in desert because some of plantation will die. But, we need to plant it depends on their ability to life, we plant cactus in desert, we plant lotus in the water, and other plantations in the ground. It is also same, we can’t push every plantation to life in the place where they don’t like, we can’t push every Bachelor Degree to become an entrepreneur.

Third, it is about mental and stress percentage. Mark Dombreck (2001) said that “ The Mental Health Community has long recognized that everyone has different mental ability that made them to get along with it, or which interfere with their selves”. Indonesia is a developing country, a fact of that is the financial economy in Indonesia always fluctuating unpredictably every time. So, it really gives impact to the entrepreneurs, where the raw materials price increase, the taxes always increase, other costs is higher, and lot of problems. This case sometimes makes a stress condition for entrepreneurs, especially the one who has “low mental” to face that problem, it will be hard. So, based on this case, it really clear that not everyone has “strong mental” to face the problem, not everyone ready to take the risk as an entrepreneur.

On the other case, there are lot of people said that if you want to be rich people, so you need to become an entrepreneur. But they are totally wrong, rich or not a person is, it depends on their spirit to be success. As stated in commandment of Allah SWT QS. Ar-Ra’ad Verse 11, “The fact is that Allah never changes the condition of a people until they intend to change it themselves”. It means, Success is not because you are an entrepreneur, but the “spirit” itself is number one. We can see a lot of entrepreneurs, but not all of them are succeed. We can see a lot of workers, but only some of them are succeed. So, it depends on personal spirit, we want to be success or not.

In summary, there are some reasons why I disagreed if every bachelor degree should become an entrepreneur. It caused because career in the first year graduation, everyone has different capabilities, and also the mental – stress percentage in everybody is different to face the problem. In other case, success or not a person is, depend on their spirit. So, let us make higher our spirit to become succeed and useful by surrounding.

References

Al-Qur’an : QS. Ar-Ra’ad verse 11

Dombreck, M. (2001). Everyone Has A Personality. Disorders & Issues. Retrieved October  6^th, 2017
                        from https://www.mentalhealth.net

Greenhaus, J., & Allen, T. (2011). Work family balance : a review and extension of the literature.
                        Handbook of Occupational Health Psychology. Washington DC: Americam
                        Psychologican Association, pp. 165-183.

Laganelli, L. (2015). Everyone has their own unique gifts and abilities. Retrieved October  6^th, 2017
                        from https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/everyone-has-own-unique-gifts-abilities-
                        concept-developer/






                       

                       

Addition
this one is Thesis sentences
this one is Major Supporting Sentences
this one is Counterargument sentences
this one is concluding paragraph

Should everyone become an entrepreneur?

(Case : Bachelor Degree)

               Everyone is unique. They have their own thoughts and backgrounds that made us could not argue with it. Bachelor Degree is the example of it, the stage of people who have various field of science according to their major’s concentration. That’s why, I disagree if every Bachelor Degree should be an entrepreneur. Due to several reasons behind it, everyone has some of their own shortcomings and advantages, that’s bachelor Degree also is.

               First, a Bachelor Degree needs to balance their life in the first year after they are graduated. Like a baby who just born to the world, bachelor degree also same, they just graduated and just born to the world to see what the “real life” is. Because of that, there must be an experience for adapting them to the new world. If they just go become an entrepreneur, it is quiet risky because not everyone can successfully do adaptation to their new world, especially in the entrepreneurship world which has high risk percentage. Otherwise, If they fail, they will go down because they don’t have “comfort place” enough to be reserved. For example, a young entrepreneur didn’t afraid to take risk, if he or she go bankrupt that’s not a problem because he or she already got a good job. So, this is clear enough how important working first rather then become an entrepreneur for Bachelor Degree. Moreover, work life balance is thus defined as feeling effective and satisfied in both work and personal life domains (Greenhaus &  Allen, 2011).

               Second, everyone has their unique capabilities. Lawrence Leganelli (2015) wrote in his page that “Everyone has their own unique gifts and abilities that they can share with the world.” In this case, It means that not everyone can match with entrepreneurship’s world. Some of people may love it, the others just like it as hobby, but in facts some of people not like that world anymore. This condition depends on human’s capability, because human has their own predilection. Let we take “plantation example”, we can’t plant every plantation in desert because some of plantation will die. However, we need to plant it depends on their ability to life, we plant cactus in desert, we plant lotus in the water, and other plantations in the ground. It is also same, we can’t push every plantation to life in the place where they don’t like, we can’t push every Bachelor Degree to become an entrepreneur.

               Third, it is about mental and stress percentage. Mark Dombreck (2001) said that “ The Mental Health Community has long recognized that everyone has different mental ability that made them to get along with it, or which interfere with their selves”. Indonesia is a developing country, a fact of that is the financial economy in Indonesia always fluctuating unpredictably every time. So, it really gives impact to the entrepreneurs, where the raw materials price increase, the taxes always increase, other costs is higher, and lot of problems. This case sometimes makes a stress condition for entrepreneurs, especially the one who has “low mental” to face that problem, it will be hard. So, based on this case, it really clear that not everyone has “strong mental” to face the problem, not everyone ready to take the risk as an entrepreneur.

               On the other case, there are lot of people said that if you want to be rich people, so you need to become an entrepreneur. But they are totally wrong, rich or not a person is, it depends on their spirit to be success. As stated in commandment of Allah SWT QS. Ar-Ra’ad Verse 11, “The fact is that Allah never changes the condition of a people until they intend to change it themselves”. It means, Success is not because you are an entrepreneur, but the “spirit” itself is number one. We can see a lot of entrepreneurs, but not all of them are succeed. We can see a lot of workers, but only some of them are succeed. So, it depends on personal spirit, we want to be success or not.

               In summary, there are some reasons why I disagreed if every bachelor degree should become an entrepreneur. It caused because career in the first year graduation, everyone has different capabilities, and also the mental – stress percentage in everybody is different to face the problem. In other case, success or not a person is, depend on their spirit. So, let us make higher our spirit to become succeed and useful by surrounding.

References

Al-Qur’an : QS. Ar-Ra’ad verse 11

Dombreck, M. (2001). Everyone Has A Personality. Disorders & Issues. Retrieved October  6^th, 2017
                        from https://www.mentalhealth.net

Greenhaus, J., & Allen, T. (2011). Work family balance : a review and extension of the literature.
                        Handbook of Occupational Health Psychology. Washington DC: Americam
                        Psychologican Association, pp. 165-183.

Laganelli, L. (2015). Everyone has their own unique gifts and abilities. Retrieved October  6^th, 2017
                        from https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/everyone-has-own-unique-gifts-abilities-
                        concept-developer/