A Bundle Histories of Bandung
If we talk about Bandung, what things that come in our mind? some people said
Bandung is a cool city where we can see some of tea and strawberry gardens,
also, their mountains and fresh air. Bandung is the capital city of West Java
province in Indonesia and this condition making Bandung as the 2nd largest
metropolitan area with 8,495,928 inhabitants listed in the 2015 Badan Pusat
Statistik data. It is the nation's third most populous city, with over 2.6
million (2015) and well known with its Paris Van Java, lifestyle, and also its
tourist attraction.
Besides is, actually Bandung has lot of histories to be written and known.
Bandung is a city that occupied because its strategic place. Then, in this post
i will share more about Bandung and its Histories. The place, the memorable day
and incident, and also the landmark of Bandung itself so that we can more aware
about our surrounding and be grateful to Heroes services.
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1. Plan your paragraph about the life of an important person or inventor in your country’s history.
Main Topic :
The dedication of Mohammad Toha
Sub Topics :
1.)
The early life of Mohammad Toha
2.)
Muhammad Toha involves in Millitary
3.)
Sacrificed of Muhammad Toha in
Bandung the sea of flame
1
Muhammad
Toha, Saved Indonesia From Flame by Flame
Muhammad Toha is one of the most
dedicated hero in Indonesia. He was an
Indonesia guerilla revered as a hero and martyr for his act self-sacrifice
during the Indonesian National Revolution. Mohammad Toha was born in
Banceuy street, Bandung, on 1927. He
started his education in a Volk School (Village School for Indigenous)
when he was 7 years old. Unfortunately,
he must forced to finish his study at the 4th grade because of the
world war 2. After that, in daily, he just helped his grandparent in Biro
Sunda and learned the mechanic car in the ‘Japan vehicle repair shop’ until
he could spoke in Japanese fluently. On the family and friends reviews,
Muhammad Toha was a clever man, obedient to his parents, and liked by his
friends. The first
way that introduced Muhammad Toha to Military world was seinandan, a youth association with the aim to help the
military power of Japan against the allies. Later on, after Indonesian’s
independence, he joined BRI (Barisan Rakjat Indonesia) which was an
organization for gathered Indonesian youth. Then, he became the first ‘attack
command’ because the situation in Bandung was unpredictable. On March 1946, a big
memorable incident happened in Bandung, Muhammad Toha sacrificed his self in
this incident for blown up the ammunition. It caused by a Ultimatum from
the British Commander for the Indonesian Combatants to leave the city. In
response, the southern part of Bandung was deliberately burned down because
Bandung citizens thought if they burned the city, Bandung would not became
useful by the allies after the allies came to Bandung. In short,
Bandung city was fired greatly and until now people still remembered Muhammad Toha’s
Brave dedication and called this incident by Bandung the sea of flame.
Main Topic :
Bandung the sea of flame Monument is
a landmark of Bandung city
Sub Topics :
1.)
The location of Bandung the Sea of Flame
Monument
2.)
The establishment of Bandung the Sea
of Flame Monument
3.)
The content of Bandung the Sea of
Flame Monument
Bandung
the Sea of Flame Monument
Bandung
the Sea of Flame Monument is a monument that became a landmark of Bandung city. This
monument is really familiar for Bandung and West Java Citizens. We can say that
it is one of the most memorable Monument in Bandung. This monument is located in Tegallega
field, the center of Bandung city. In addition, not only placed in the
center of Bandung city, this monument also near the biggest station in Bandung
which is only 9,7 KM from Dayeuh Kolot Station (it takes 29 minutes by car). This Bandung the Sea
of Flame, actually not too high. This
monument has a height of 45 Meters and has 9 sides of the field. At its peak,
there is a form of licking fire that leads upward. This monument color is
golden yellow like a blazing fire. Talk about the establishment of this monument, this
monument was established in 1981 to commemorate the historic event of Bandung
the Sea of Flame. At that time, this
monument was designed by Sunaryo, a contemporary artist who was also a former
lecturer arts at Bandung Institute Technology. In this early 2017, the
Government of Bandung City under the leadership of Mayor Ridwan Kamil renovated
this Tegallega field. So, this field now become bigger and cleaner. All in all, this
Monument is worthy to be a landmark of Bandung city because its unique shape
and the memorable story behind it.
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3. Plan your paragraph about the important day, year, or decade in your country’s history.
3. Plan your paragraph about the important day, year, or decade in your country’s history.
Main Topic :
24th March is the
reflection of Indonesia as the brave nation
Sub Topics :
1.)
24th March is the day to
commemorate Bandung the Sea of Flame
2.)
The chronologies of 24th
March
3.)
The celebration by some people on 24th
March
24th March, Reflection of the Brave Nation
What people
think about 24th March? Is it a tuberculosis day by United Nation?
Not only that, but also for Bandung Citizens it is really memorable day. In that date, we remembered it as the reflection of the brave
nation. In that day, Indonesian citizens showed that Indonesia is a
independent country, they did not afraid of
the allies. 24th
March in every single year always commemorated as a Bandung the Sea of Flame
day. This was inaugurated by the
Government of Indonesia in 1981 as the tribute of the heroes and Bandung
citizens in this big incident. This was a hectic
condition with some chronologies behind it. On 23rd March,
200.000 Bandung citizen fired their home, then leaved to the southern of
Bandung. This thing was done to prevent Allied soldiers and Dutch NICA soldiers
from being able to use the Bandung city as a strategic military base. Now, Bandung already
safe, and people commemorate it with some celebration in that 24th
March. For instance, some communities,
youth organization, and students from High School celebrate it with Torch
Parade. On the other hand, the onthel bike parade, some festivals, and a
memorial service was held to commemorate this historic day. In conclusion,
24th March is really memorable for Bandung citizen until now.
Hi meta, it is really nice paragraphs . i like the way you serve your paragraphs with some metamorphs, keep it up !
BalasHapusHi Carine, nice to see ur comment here :) thanks for adding a nice comment!
HapusWow such a great paragraphs , you have underlined your paragraphs in good way. So that, for me, as the reader we can find easily some of topic sentences, major and minor supporting sentences..
BalasHapusGood job met;))
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HapusHello meta, thats really nice to read your paragraphs. Your paragraphs have been structured well. I cant find any mistakes so far..
BalasHapusKeep writing dek!
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HapusThats really interesting paragraphs, keep it up!!
BalasHapusHi meta, i like your patagraphs. Especially the way you choose bandung as your historical paragraphs. Just for suggestion maybe you can do care about some little things such as :
BalasHapusIt was cemmomerated -> it is
Because we still do that until now. Then, keep it up!
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HapusHi metaaa glad to read your post again. Long time no see and you write about bandung. Wow.. How miss we are about it. Actually, maybe you can put also gedung sate, because it is also known there..
BalasHapusHi cha, thats relly nice to hear you here! thanks for adding a nice comment
HapusWow really informative essay, especially for me that have not heard about the bandung lautan api cemmemoration day.
BalasHapusOh ya, maybe you need to find another conjunction rather than still write "at that date" after "at that day"
Well, good job meta
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HapusHi meta, i like the way you coloured your paragraphs. It looks interesting to read.. And about the histories are really informative. Thanks to let me know...
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